First draft of my music video

Above, is my first draft of my music video. During the course of editing, I wanted to keep it simple with the use of a few overlays. The footage itself at this point is still incomplete, So, it ends at 1:32, instead of the full time. The reason as to why my first draft is incomplete, is purely on the fact that It was difficult to find times and days in order to film my footage. However, with the footage shown here, there is limited use of overlays, which is something that I want to work on for my final product, as I fell as if it will make it more visually appealing to look at. Rather than it just being plain footage with no use of effects.